Hey everyone, I'm going to keep this real short and sweet: I've made my first round of revisions to Sundering.
I developed one character arc more, changed a few extremely significant events to make them even more gut-wrenching, totally restructured another character's arc and some of the earlier chapters where he and another are introduced, added to a few existing scenes, added two new scenes, and dropped in some more world building. In essence, this was a big structural and plot revision, and I'm very pleased with how it's turned out so far.
I still think this next round of edits will be my most extensive, as here I'll be delving into the nitty-gritty of the world and the character arcs. I'm going to take a break for a few weeks, though, and let my beta readers catch up.
I'll still be working on short stories and other stuff behind the scenes.
You can read chapter two here: https://calplogan.com/chapter-two/
Would you read more? Let me know!
As always, thanks for reading!